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I dont know if you noticed
and I hope you didnt
but all those times I got nervous
all those times my face got warm and red
It was because of you

The reason I can't look you in the eye
why I can't get close to you
the reason why I try to prevent even the slightest contact
The same reason I run out of things to say
Is because I'm afraid of blushing in front of you

But lately...All of that changed
I tried to get closer, wanted you near
I tried to brush our fingers together
My heart wanted me to tell you everything
Thank god I didnt....

I over reacted
Let my heart get ahead of me
Let myself misread your actions
That's why I sit here confused
Because my heart lied to me...

It told me that you felt the same
or that you might feel the same
but now I've got my head on straight
I now know everything I thought about,
was just you being a good friend

I shouldn't have been so naive
should've known there was no way
should've remembered how out of my league you are
I'm sorry for forgetting all that
I'm sorry for being so stupid.
©2008-2009 ~XxLifelessDreamerxX
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Wrote this today when I finally cleared my head...
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~spacerocketbunny:iconspacerocketbunny: May 12, 2008, 4:41:11 PM
this is deep. kinda makes me tear, its a sad little poem :(
very well written, you make me so jealous, i feel like such an amateur compared to you.
awesome work, its always a joy to read what you've written.

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I was determined in chicago, but instead i dug my teeth into my knees and settled for a telephone, and sang into your machine: You are my sunshine my only sunshine.
~HaruKeishi:iconHaruKeishi: May 12, 2008, 6:27:15 PM
Wow... Sad, but I think just about everone has gotten themselves into a situation like this, I know I have...

Great work!

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~XxLifelessDreamerxX:iconXxLifelessDreamerxX: May 12, 2008, 7:59:05 PM
Are you serious?

I seriously was just randomly writing this in social today, no scheme or anything, just wrote what I felt.

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The Only point to Life maybe be Death....

But Love isnt such a bad De-tour.
~XxLifelessDreamerxX:iconXxLifelessDreamerxX: May 12, 2008, 8:03:47 PM
I know, common situation and I'm not trying to make it sound like my life is any worse than another ^^; Ranting now, sorry.

But thanks for the comment and the appraisal :-)

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The Only point to Life maybe be Death....

But Love isnt such a bad De-tour.
~HaruKeishi:iconHaruKeishi: May 13, 2008, 4:19:32 AM
Oh, yes... Anytime!!

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~spacerocketbunny:iconspacerocketbunny: May 13, 2008, 6:29:38 AM
yes i am serious. i love your writing because it always brings in strong emotion and as the reader you can sorta feel it,that takes alot of talent.

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I was determined in chicago, but instead i dug my teeth into my knees and settled for a telephone, and sang into your machine: You are my sunshine my only sunshine.
~keytaro:iconkeytaro: May 24, 2008, 11:17:19 AM
whow!someone actually lived the same situation i have!...it s weird...like you read into my heart or something...yet i find it sorta cool you did!:Dyou vewritten what i couldn t express with my own words as i don t know how to properly WRITE what i m thinking(cuz sometimes every thing seems so blurry in my head!)...
well!sry cuz i sorta wasted ur time with my mindless babbleing!:D i talk too much!*faves*

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~XxLifelessDreamerxX:iconXxLifelessDreamerxX: May 26, 2008, 10:07:09 AM
Not at all
I'm glad to get such a long comment
Thanks! :D
As for how I write, glad to see that someone can related to it
that's all I could've hoped for.

Thanks too for the fave!! :highfive:

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But Love isnt such a bad De-tour.
~keytaro:iconkeytaro: May 26, 2008, 10:45:46 AM
you re welcome!:Dreally:)!

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